Sunday, September 24, 2006

Cooking and Composing?

What is about writing and writing research that makes people want to talk about "cooking"? Are we in the feminized composition kitchen?

Peter Elbow once famously likened writing to cooking. Victor Villaneuva begins the "Preface to the First Edition" of _Cross-talk_ with a discussion of making healthy pancakes for his children. I know Victor knows how to cook because he has moonlighted as a short order cook to supplement his once-inadequate professor's salary when he was at Northern Arizona University. He talks about this in his book _Bootstraps_. In the Preface to _Cross-talk_the egg added the touch of leavening needed for the pancake, and Villaneuva modified his cooking process, adjusting it to a more successful result. He did so because he had an "understanding of how eggs work in cooking." He "understood the theory." But many of us who teach writing don't understand the theory. We're busy mixing and matching theories with wild abandon, so that we end up in interview rooms, saying that we are Marxists who align ourselves with Peter Elbow and Ken Bruffee (xiv). We end up not being able to navigate composition's "currents," as Villaneuva puts it. _Cross-talk_ is intended as a guide for those us who teach graduate courses in comp theory, those of us who take those courses, and those of us who have taught comp for a long time and want a refresher (xiv). The book is dedicated to Sam and Tom, two graduate students, and all other graduate students, the users of the book, who have commented on the book's inner workings and logic.

To get back to the pancake/cooking metaphor, through reading this book, we "should be able to come up with quite the pancake recipe, something you [we] can swallow" (xiv).

We get a perspective in this volume, but we don't get a single-point of view. Villaneuva lets us know all the things he has left out in the first edition and all the things he added to address those omissions in the second edition. We get the "Son of Cross-Talk" (hey Victor, what about "Daughter" of Cross-Talk") who has more to say about writers of color, feminists, technology studies, and service learning among others.

I think this is a damn good book, a very useful overview without a lot of apparatus bells and whistles. The sections are set up around the conversation metaphor, with the idea of talk anchoring all of the segments.

The Givens in Our Conversations: The Writing Process
Talking in Terms of Discourse
Scientific Talk: Developmental Schemas
Talking about Writing in Society
Talking about Selves and Schools: Voice, Voices, and Other Voices
Continuing the Conversation

These are broad rubrics with diverse essays housed within. The conversation begins with writing process, which locates composition history in the mid-twentieth century instead of the 19th century or earlier. This locates the reader more in our current historical moment--modern comp studies.

The "given" in the conversation is the writing process. I don't know if it is still the given. Perhaps it functions as the "given" to react against now with the "post-process" movement? But here goes to try to give an overview of the Villanueva overview. In short, the writing process history is narrated briefly and succinctly:

1959: "the National Academy of Sciences sponsored the Woods Hole Conference" with Jerome Bruner at the helm. There was a shift "for all schooling to a process of cognitive development. 'Process' became the new catchword" (1).

1963: Braddock, Lloyd-Jones, and Schoer call for research on writing (not just product or pedagogy) itself in their book _Research in Written Composition_.

1966: The Dartmouth Conference where "fifty teachers of English from England and the United States met to discuss common problems" (1). The Yanks discovered that the Brits taught writing as "individual development, a matter of self-discovery" (1).

1971: Janet Emig answers the "call" issued by Braddock et al by studying the composing processes of eight twelfth graders.

We're reading Emig's call this week and blogging the chapters, but there were other calls as well: Perl, Murray, Sommers, Lunsford and Ede, Kaustman Breuch, even Ong (?). Where's Elbow?

But what is the backdrop for this interest in process?

Politics?
Social movements?
Art and literature?

Here is a quick speculation: The U.N. with a focus on negotiating and international responsibility for global affairs. The process of global diplomacy.
Civil rights, feminism, gay rights, human rights: all have highly process-oriented components
Art and literature, the avant garde, experimental film, stream of consciousness in fiction, etc
Progressive educational theory stemming from John Dewey's idea of "experience as education" and even earlier notions
Psychological theories that emphasize process-oriented therapies and theories

I think there is much more to say about why process is a "given."

Tom has just informed me is turning off the power to fix an outlet, so I must sign off now as I have no computer battery (it has been recalled).

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

It appears we are in the feminized composition kitchen!!!! But I agree that despite Vitanza's slightly offensive cooking metaphor, I do appreciate this overview of modern composition studies. In other courses, both 631 and 731, we have been talking about the canon, and can't help but notice in the table of contents that all the names are familiar, even to someone who has never been formally trained in comp studies before. Consequently, in viewing this canon, I just had to ask what voices were included and which voices were left out. About voices included: Berlin, Lunsford, Flower, Ritchie, Bizzell, and Rose are represented twice. Is this because as Vitanza says in preface to second edition, they are authors of most cited articles or are there other reasons?
To see who was left out, I turned to the List of Resources at the back of the book and discovered many names I was surprised had no place in this canon: Crowley, Friere, Anzaldua, Elbow, Gilyard, Heath, hooks, Lindeman, Macorie, Moffett, Shor. What important conversations raised by these scholars AND others are being left out and why? What other scholars and conversations did not even make it to the list of resources? What effect does this inclusion/exclusion have on our field if this book serves as a major text in most introductory courses to our field? This compilation, as any, challenges us to address these questions.

I also think it is worthwhile to talk about process being a "given" and what connotations this claim conjurs. I, for example, feel trapped by that claim, as if process oriented pedagogy is here to stay for all time forward. Thinking about "post-process" pedagogy is exciting to me because it creates space to complicate some of the processes that have been given in our field. The issue of time, raised by Wallas in Emig's THE COMPOSING PROCESS OF TWELFTH GRADERS, made me really stop and question the point of process based pedagogy if we don't give our students time to work through the various stages. I also think more work could be done to reinvent the stages. Wallas uses the term incubation to describe on stage "good" writers go through, and I feel this important and generative stage is one of many that are glossed over in our classrooms.

When we assume that anything is a given, we usually cut off the opportunity to question, challenge, rethink the very foundation of our line of reasoning, as if we can begin a discussion without having to go back to the very beginning. In light of the obvious limitation problems with Emig and Perl's case studies, it might be worthy to go back to the investigating board to see if we can revisualize a composing process that is more inclusive, and therefore, more representative of what a wider base of writers actually do do when setting pen to paper. {Side note: This metaphor is obviously no longer applicable since so many writers compose on computers now...Isn't that kind of sad?} But on that note, one worthy investigation would be to analyze how technology has affected the composing process.

Anyway, gotta run and clean the kitchen before I head off to school. That damn kitchen...It never stays clean.

Laurie

Anonymous said...

Ps. In case you are wondering, Eileen, the deleted comment was mine. I wrote it at 1:30 in the morning and made a couple of comments that could have been misinterpreted by the cyberworld. I decided I better revise. Laurie